The vibrations and sounds didn’t allow him to think while a sheet of metal passed over his head. Frank saw hair fall over his shoulders. Years of patient growth were destroyed in an instant.
The barber continued shaving Frank’s head. Leaving him with that common youth silhouette. Neither of them realized the change that was about to take place. Frank’s body began to adjust, finding a new balance without the help of a tool.
It didn’t seem like a problem when he left the barber shop, Frank looked at the world with slightly different eyes and the memory of his youth returned. What are they up to? he wondered while thinking of his old friends.
The veil of night covered the streets of the city. Frank’s car traveled fast, eagerly waiting for the view on his wife’s face.
Upon arrival, Frank ran inside to find an empty house. After a moment, Linda━the babysitter they’ve worked with for a couple of years━came out of the kitchen in her usual red short skirt, black long stockings and white shirt tied at waist.
“Sir,” Linda said, “the boys haven’t come yet.”
Frank looked at the young woman and found her intoxicatingly attractive. “What are you doing here?”
“Your wife asked me to babysit,” Linda said.
“Give me a second,” Frank said, and walked away while looking at his phone.
After checking his messages, Frank came back and noticed that Linda had disappeared. He continued searching until he found her leaning against the kitchen island.
“The kids aren’t coming…” Frank said, and he saw Linda biting her lip, “but we could do something. That way you’ll make some money for the night.”
Linda turned around, the movement lifting her short skirt. “Could you help me out?”
“Of course,” Frank said, finding himself staring at Linda’s skin.
“I just need to reach…” she said, reaching for a high shelf.
Frank took advantage of the circumstance━not measuring the risk of what he was doing━and grabbed Linda by the waist to help her up.
Linda was surprised by the ease with which he lifted her, almost forgetting what she wanted to reach. When she caught her breath, she grabbed a box of cereal before being put down. “Thank you,” she said, turned and hugged the box. “You are strong.”
“You’ve become a very attractive woman,” Frank said, stepping back and looking at Linda from head to toe.
Linda blushed and looked down. “You’re not that bad.”
Frank caught a glint in Linda’s eyes. “You are so beautiful.”
Linda looked into his eyes and then slowly closed them.
Frank noticed the red on Linda’s lips and moved closer to her. He closed his eyes once their lips were together. The kiss left them motionless, enjoying the tingling that ran through their bodies. Then he moved away from her, unsure of what had just happened. They looked into each other’s eyes. Until Frank kissed her again.
His passionate kisses crashed the cereal box between them. Before long, Frank’s hands were all over Linda’s body. Slowly caress every inch of her, taking her shirt over her head before tossing it away.
Frank grabbed Linda and carried her to the kitchen island. After sitting her down, he reached for her panties and pulled them down.
Linda raised up her skirt and watched him pull down his pants. Then felt Frank’s hands on her hips.
Frank approached her slowly. Enjoying every inch of Linda’s warmth. Uncontrollably lost in the idea of feeling an unreachable woman. His body was transported to a strange place. The sensations continued to hold him hostage and his breathing was heavy, but everything changed.
When Frank opened his eyes he was laying on his bed, immediately he reached up and grabbed his long hair. Then he turned and saw his wife sleeping next to him and got up to wash himself.
Great words 👍🙂
We must continue to learn.
A very clever short story. It would make a good short film.
Good thing it was just a dream. Frank still had his hair when he awaken. Samson could have used that dream! LOLGB+
I don’t think it was a dream. His wife and his hair, that is the dream. We are always dreaming of waking up.
Neat synchronicity occured early this morning around 1am or so. My barber, sent me a FB request. I been going to him since spring of 2020. So I accepted it.
I agree. Bold sensation had consumed me. You feed my abyss!
It sounds like Frank longs for his younger days. Poor Frank, we all grow old.
haha OMG…unexpected twist!
Great story, not so great husband.
I don’t know what happened to my comment.
What a passionate escapade that turned out to be an erotic dream.
I love the romance, he never lost his hair
I enjoyed the dream.
A really well executed story, Sebastian! It’s often said that intimate scenes are hard to write, but you did great!
I loved this. I read it again and felt all these emotions. I needed that today. Thank you! Great story!
Ah. That kind of a story. Got it. Good. Ta.
Another phenomenal piece. You have an insane gift for all styles of writing. I’m a fan, for sure!
Oh my that was one hot scene. Great story and lovely ending too. ❤️🤗🦋 sending a warm hug Joni
I could see the kitchen island and the passion between them,intoxicating story 😉
Thank goodness it was a dream, but I’ll bet he does still go get that haircut. 😜
“Linda turned around, the movement lifting her short skirt. “Could you help me out?””
In that moment I was like “Uh oh … trouble’s afoot.” But then then the incredibly innocent cereals box came to pass. 😉
Sweet turn. =^.^=
I’m in awe. new follower here!
A twist in the tale. Nice.
persistent, you are, one key to excellence is constancy.
had you ever done a biography? be interesting reading.
nothing better than a good dream. You caught the essence of it. Good job.
Very cool story, but I was hoping for a more resolute conclusion as opposed to being left horny like this.
What do they call it? A wet dream! They happen less and less the older you get.
Amazing writer; we should take our show on the road.
If it hadn’t been a dream, I would have been distressed. I do believe we can go anywhere we want in our fantasies and it is moral – not a sin. So, I liked this pieces.
Held my interest… thanks
Realistic enough for a dream.
👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾😂😂😂😂😂….honestly Sebastian, I was hoping he was going to suddenly open his eyes….and he did…😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
You have a way at describing scenes…giving each word a breath of life….catapulting, or should I have written transporting each reader to that space….I love it👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Another amazing story. Thank you.
Another great story. Thank you.
I also like your illustrations every week. Where do you find them, or do you create them yourself?
You have a gift of writing ♥
Good twist. 🙂
Great story you definitely are a good story teller 🙂
Ahhh…just but a dream
Refreshal mode Sebastián.. Good thinking👍🏼
This story is terrific. It held my attention from the beginning to the end. Haha too bad it was an erotic dream. Love it. Keep it coming.
U got me head shot .
Better ending than I expected. I figure his wife was going to walk in on them. Nice twist.
I thought the barber must have given him a nice mullet. Much enjoyed the yarn. Many thanks.
Fantastic read! You definitely held me hostage until the very end.
I was hooked … great story
I have a dream 2 days ago but is my partner with my school mate. Woke up with anger. It is a dream I told myself. Took me few days to think what does that mean? Hey, Sebastian. Thanks! Anyway is well written.
loving it but regret it because Id di not do something like that in my younger days.
Very interesting story. Nicely penned also. Great! Thanks
grazie di tutto ragazzo! spervo poter vederti scrivere molto spesso
What a beautiful quate it means you are a really high bro in everything..it’s just kiddiness don’t take much hard …my eyes was really admire this type of quote and what I say pic.
This type of same ,I written so please give some time of myself also so as to become such type of person that he has become
haha, love it! 🙂
Have you found the system to rightly combine your great short stories and the huge amount of followers?
Thanks for sharing your writings and great sayings!
Just read Boldness very well written and clever twist at the end. Nice job and thanks for posting it. Go well, David.
Seemed like one of those dreams you’d want to dive back into after you woke up for a moment and fell back asleep again which happens to me occasionally.
I don’t know how many dreams I’ve had with a situation that made me so happy to be experiencing (usually in a similar situation) just to have woken up mid-dream and it’s gone forever and then the helpless feeling knowing there’s nothing I can do to bring it back.
Drives me bonkers when that happens.
Frank and Linda, wow. I got caught up in the moment, alway asking, “What about your wife?”
Can’t control dreams, though!
I like this
Who knows whether it was a dream really?
Awesome read you are extremely talented
Simply beautiful story. I like the way you write. Thank you.
I liked the final twist.
It reminded me of CS Lewis’s “The Great Divorce.”
This is very nice, luv it, keep it up bro