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Secrets hidden in the dark emerge, causing chaos. The world trembles, but life goes on. Despite the turmoil, there’s still hope and purpose.
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A surreal scene leaving the reader waiting for the reappearance of a knight, a mistress, and the clarity of daylight.
You write in “pictures” which is similar to my style. I enjoyed it!
This piece is truly like a dream all the way through. A confounding dream.
A swirling dreamscape–or is it? A disorienting mixture of dream(s) and reality.
I always enjoy reading your writings. You paint such vivid pictures in the mind.
As others have commented, the confounding of dream and reality is both perplexing and effective.
Intriguing characters and absorbing narrative, I like the way reality and dreams overlap and then become parallel universes, looking forward to further blogs
Absorbing. It draws you into the story and you want to hear more about what is going to happen. Vivid pictures of the characters and setting.
This is like a story of everyone’s life put in a beautiful mix of words, Sebastian. We all have dreams that are most often times very far from our reality, and we never stop thinking about them until sometimes, we just lose it. Lucid dreams can happen to the best of us. 🙂 Keep writing please. 🙂
truly enjoyed this blurring of the worlds
Amazing read as always!
This really pulls you in and holds you there. There is a lot of emotion in the piece and imagery. I really enjoyed reading it thanks for sharing.
There’s so much one can offer through the medium of dreams. Thoughts and deeper understandings come to all of us as visions and intuitive insights into worlds that lie beyond the one we now live in. It takes a good writer to put these ‘unspeakable’ insights into a clearly defined form that all can understand, or at least glmpse. Thank you for sharing your short story, Sebastian, it held the attention.
Hola Sebastian, te paso link Gracias!
Juan
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