Follow me

Dreams of a Future
June 23, 2021|Short Story

Dreams of a Future

Dreams of a Future

Anxiety hits me hard every time I have to go outside. Sunny invited me and some other friends to his house; I couldn’t refuse. I got dressed and mustered the courage I needed to leave my sweet library.

Sunny picked me up… by the time we got to his house, everyone was already there. The place was so big, like a small castle, full of wooden details and old furniture.

He showed us all the rooms in the mansion. At our request, of course, each room seemed bigger than my entire house and more beautiful than any place I’d ever seen.

The room that made me lose my breath was the library. A round room full of books, ceiling to floor, all around us. There was a desk with a chair in the middle, Sunny said that’s where his father reads.

While looking at the books I saw something, exactly in front of the chair, there was a book that I recognized on the fifth shelf. I walked over to get a closer look at it, without touching it, making sure it was the book I was thinking of.

Sunny and the others were ready to leave and watch the movie, but I wasn’t.

“I’ll check the library for a few minutes if it’s okay with you,” I said.

“Of course,” Sunny said, “call me when you’re done.”

After a few minutes, I heard the door, looked back and saw Sunny’s father. “Hello sir, I am friends with Sunny…I have a question for you.”

He smiled and took a seat in his chair, he was dressed in a black suit with red details, with a long white beard.

“You must be Flower,” he said. “Sunny talks fondly of you. Nice to meet you, I’m Mack.”

I nodded. “Where did you get that book from?” I say pointing to the book. “I have it too and the author never signed it, it’s my favourite book.”

He looked at me with his eyes wide open. “You wouldn’t believe me if I told you,” he said, then stood up and grabbed the book from the shelf.

Mack was not the type of person you meet regularly. There was something mysterious about Sunny’s father. “Try me… you will be surprised,” I said.

“Come with me,” Mack said.

His broad shoulders under the coat of his suit made him look almost twice the size of Sunny. “Sit with me,” he finally said and turned around.

I sat on the edge of a sofa and waited for him…

“It all started when I met Gustaf Lottie,” he said, sitting on a couch to my right and handing me the book. “I was sceptical of the supernatural before I met him.”

“You are friends with the author,” I said, pressing the book against my chest.

“You can say that,” he said, looking away for an instant. “We became very close after what happened.”

“Please tell me more.”

“I had a day to burn in Morocco,” he continued, “but I got bored of the same tour of the city as anywhere else. I found an advertisement for an expedition to the countryside. Just a couple of hours away. I needed to clear my mind…”

He stopped and looked at the bookshelf.

“I never thought Gustaf Lottie would have been my guide. He was not a very well known writer at the time. I think he was just trying to make a living while he mastered his craft.”

“How long have you known him?” I asked and thought it was silly of me to interrupt.

“It’s been almost ten years,” he said and looked at me. “There is more to him than meets the eye. He has been trained as a shaman, but I did not know it at the time…”

Mack paused, remembering.

“Anyway, we met in a park and we immediately hit it off like he was an old friend I hadn’t seen in a while. His ease with words was incredible. At that moment, I knew he wasn’t the usual guide.”

Mack got up and looked at me smiling. “Follow me, Flower,” he said. “There’s something I would like to show you.”

He grabbed a book from his shelf and a secret door opened. Mack’s dark brown shoes seemed to drown in the wood of the staircase below. He reached a black door, opened it and turned on the light.

“All the books he has written are here…”

“This is amazing, a treasure, a gold mine.”

Mack took a book and handed it to me.

“This is my favourite, On Gustaf Lottie’s Waves of Immortality. His last book.”

“What happened to him? Where is he now?”

“Unfortunately… in an old cemetery. He died last year. We finished the book a week before his death.”

“Us?” I asked, looking around at all the old books.

“Yes, we… he taught me how to write a good book. He was a supernatural entity, you know? He lived many more years than I could count. He was aware of most of the events that happened on this earth.”

“What was he? How could he live longer than humans do?”

“That’s not something I can tell you, maybe he will, somehow.”

Every word Mack said taught me something and I became more confused: he spoke clearly and yet not.

Mack pulled out a bottle of whiskey from under the ladder, the ladder used to reach the upper books, opened it and took a sip.

“He was a god or something. Gustaf Lottie knew the way and taught me how to find mine.

“You see… Gustaf Lottie did more than take me on a journey to the countryside. Although, I never thought we would find the most amazing waterfall… Anyway, he knew the ways of the Earth.”

He paused and looked into the old bottle of whiskey.

“Gustaf healed me that day,” he finally said. “We don’t know anything.”

“What do you mean?”

“Our planet, it has been around for millions of years. He knew how to tap into the information of the world’s history.”

“But how?”

“Gustaf talked about a key,” Mack said, “a door to the archives. He was able to access information… all these books are nothing. He told me that the eternal consciousness of the planet is at our reach. We just needed to heal ourselves.

“He healed me. I saw him gather energy with his palms and heal my psychological wounds. After my trip with him, I was never the same.

“All this wealth… everything I own came after meeting him. We get lost easily. Following our path requires focus and complete dedication. Not a step of our lives can be taken without careful attention.

“I lost my way a couple of times after meeting Gustaf. He was the only one I knew who was able to steer me back.

“Every century has a guide, he told me—he was our generation’s.”

“But you told me he lived for longer than any other human,” I said and immediately regretted it.

“Our world needed him… that’s why he was given the power to heal. Without him, there would be no human race.

“Money came easily after I met him. My purpose was to be his eyes. Not many knew this about Gustaf but he was blind.”

“Really?” I said in surprise. “But how?”

“He could not complete his task without the help of another. I became his eyes and we wrote all these books to heal the world.

“I haven’t finished my task. But I hope to see him soon.”

A collaboration with BurnHeaven.com


Sebastian Iturralde

I am a fiction blogger and lover of literature, art, and all things creative. As a citizen of this beautiful planet, I am constantly inspired by the natural world around me.


  • June 23, 2021 at 7:00 am

    A pleasure working with you at this!

  • June 23, 2021 at 7:01 am

    Nicely written. It gives one pause to wonder, what goes on around us, who is there we have not yet met, who will be our earthly guide.

    • June 23, 2021 at 12:01 pm

      You are right. The fact the conscience is the only certain thing around us makes me wonder.

    • November 18, 2021 at 11:56 pm

      Who is there we have not meant. It’s a very big truth. YOUR comment made my day. Until we have meant people who truly carry knowledge then we realize we know nothing yet. I craves for more knowledge and wisdom every minute.

      • November 19, 2021 at 9:14 am

        I have friends who I could sit and talk with for hours because their understanding of things that are new to me fascinate me. Depending on the topic I hunger for more of what they know. The universe is an amazing place filled with wonders if we would only open ourselves up to them.

        • November 19, 2021 at 10:49 am

          After i read your comment, i began to pound on what you wrote and i check and it really just defines what i do. I hunger i meet people globally. All i just need is knowledge. After i doped out from School my inquisitive to know more aggravated. God bless you ma’am!

          • November 19, 2021 at 11:30 am

            May God bless you richly as well.

  • June 23, 2021 at 7:03 am

    I can only imagine the magic held within a place with that many books.

    • June 27, 2021 at 8:32 am

      A feeling that can only be compared to a brief visit to the Akashic Records.

  • June 23, 2021 at 7:24 am

    Interesting story. I liked the pace of it too.

  • June 23, 2021 at 7:41 am

    That was a killer read! Thank you!

  • June 23, 2021 at 8:35 am

    I can imagine Flower being groomed for greater things…

  • June 23, 2021 at 8:36 am

    Sounds like a psychedelic trip that opened Mack’s eyes.

    • June 23, 2021 at 10:03 am

      Heartily agree. Exactly like a “trip.”

    • June 23, 2021 at 11:31 am

      I believe psychedelics were in the back of my mind when writing Mack with Sebastian.

      • June 23, 2021 at 11:33 am

        I can tell. It’s great.

      • June 23, 2021 at 11:57 am

        The strange part for me is having written about LSD this morning. Odd little synchronicity there.

        • June 23, 2021 at 11:58 am

          We choose the same path this morning, odd but cool.

          • June 23, 2021 at 12:02 pm

            My thoughts exactly.

  • June 23, 2021 at 8:48 am

    That’s the sort of library I dream of. The akashic record, a shaman, healer and beautifully written. Nice texture and reflection of the unseen world. Thank you for sharing your gift. It inspired me to begin sharing my own.

    • June 23, 2021 at 10:27 am

      I can definitely relate to Mack. My eyes are OPEN now.

      • June 23, 2021 at 10:57 am

        I can relate to Mack’s feeling.

        • June 23, 2021 at 10:06 pm

          Accessing the Akashic Records is like being showered with information.

          • June 23, 2021 at 10:25 pm

            From my experience it does feel that way.

  • June 23, 2021 at 10:30 am

    Another great post thank you

  • June 23, 2021 at 10:39 am

    I very much enjoy reading your work

  • June 23, 2021 at 12:01 pm

    “dreams of a future” is kinda my jam.

  • June 23, 2021 at 12:17 pm

    interesting take on the whole time thing. with books. who can argue with books?

  • June 23, 2021 at 1:33 pm

    What a great seamless collaboration here. I found myself totally captivated by the conversation and the idea!

  • June 23, 2021 at 1:50 pm

    this is an interesting story, but it needs a prequil so that the characters can be established. For instance the father’s name came to late in the narrative. And is Sunny male or female or transgender? This matters to which genre to are aiming your story at. Another rewrite would help straighten this out. Stephen King’s book on writing, I forget the title, is the best book I’ve ever read on the rewrite. The book is part autobiography/memoir and writing lessons. You basic story is good, but can be improved.

    • June 27, 2021 at 8:46 am

      I’m happy with the results and wanted to be honest about the collaboration. Although I agree with your comment and I hope you can share that book with me.

  • Susan
    June 23, 2021 at 6:07 pm

    Enjoying your writing!!

  • June 23, 2021 at 6:53 pm

    We have been under the dictatorship of rationality for approximately 250 years; ignoring that mysticism had guided humanity the previous hundred thousand years. As you have made your point so fittingly, that cannot be ignored so easily.

    • June 27, 2021 at 8:52 am

      The Serpent of Light has moved recently and the changes will bring humanity back in its tracks.

  • June 23, 2021 at 7:55 pm

    “Following our path requires focus and complete dedication.
    Not a step of our lives can be taken without careful attention.”

    • June 23, 2021 at 8:32 pm

      I simultaneously agree and disagree with your premise. Introspection is quite important. However, I am reminded of Alan Watt’s teachings. If a person stays in their logic and rationale all the time they’re likely to miss out on opportunities no? I could be wrong. It’s just that his work resonates a great deal. “Looking for the golden goodie…” well that can become a paradox. If we’re continually looking for the golden goodie, chasing it, then it becomes like chasing a rabbit. Being in the ever present now? Hmm. That’s pretty great. Again…this is just imho fellow traveler.

      • June 23, 2021 at 10:11 pm

        Full attention is required to discard the rational mind.

        • June 23, 2021 at 10:25 pm

          The journey of 1000 miles begins with a single step. The Dao is done and yet leaves nothing undone. I’m speaking to simplicity. Being present in the moment, but the more you fight something, the more one chases their tail… does that make sense. Not to argue… this is more to experience conversation. To experience difference of opinion. That’s all

          • June 23, 2021 at 10:42 pm

            It’s impossible to fight the Tao when you attentively follow it.

          • June 23, 2021 at 11:21 pm

            I am in agreement. The Dao audiobook has been like a bedtime story. I think we had words of different intonation but meant the same. Intent for harmony and not discord. 😊💫

  • June 23, 2021 at 9:43 pm

    Wow. The first thought I had was this reminds me of Roald Dahls’ short story The Wonderful Story of Henry Sugar, and then as the story continued, it took on an Agatha Christie mystery feel. It wasn’t dark, but mysterious. Oh, and the water fall, it made me think of the water of immortality in mythology. Basically, it was awesome!!

    • June 27, 2021 at 8:55 am

      It’s time to reveal the hidden secrets of our world.

      • August 11, 2021 at 2:10 am

        The world we are living is maya delusive and we are the one came to learn how to be a better person.

  • June 23, 2021 at 9:52 pm

    James 3:15-18 ~ contrast between earthly and heavenly wisdom ✨🙏 in the present moment we can get sidetracked off the eternal by putting our eyes on what it seen and temporal~ but I’m not of this world so man’s wisdom doesn’t excite me~ Good story though ☺️

    • June 23, 2021 at 10:00 pm

      Wisdom is a celestial trait, it can only be obtained when Thy will is done in earth, as it is in heaven. Trust your senses.

      • June 23, 2021 at 11:37 pm

        True wisdom comes from the mouth of God. … “For the Lord gives wisdom and from his mouth comes to the knowledge and understanding.” Proverbs 2:1-5 🙂

        • August 4, 2021 at 11:14 pm

          Very true!

        • November 19, 2021 at 12:00 am

          That’s true!

      • June 24, 2021 at 7:49 am

        Wow that statement is so wonderful, it made laugh (not mockingly, with joy 🙂

    • November 19, 2021 at 12:05 am

      Levisong222, can you please buttress what you mean here.

      • November 19, 2021 at 9:34 am

        Yes true wisdom and strategy is given to God’s ppl that seek His face, you have to go up higher, we are seated with Christ in Heavenly places. When we focus on worldly wisdom with our natural minds we are limited. No man or celestial being knows ALL the secrets or where the hidden riches in secret places are, but my Father does and He says when you lack wisdom to ask and He gives freely. Be not wise in your own eyes, apart from Him I can do nothing

        • November 19, 2021 at 10:45 am

          ” No Man or Celestial being knows all the secrets or where the hidden riches in secret places are” That sounds wonderful. It’s true though!

          • November 19, 2021 at 10:55 am

            Do you believe in luck? Lucky 0 , or do you believe in favor, its all about the mindset, and wether we ask amiss, if I ask God to bless me to be a blessing, and my heart testifies to this truth I know I have what I asked for but a double minded man shall expect to receive nothing. One of my favorite characteristics of Jesus personality is that when His critics mocked Him ” He opened not His mouth ” . Because when you know who you are You don’t have to prove who you are 😉 God bless you

          • November 19, 2021 at 10:58 am

            When you tell that to a believer , then he says ” Christ was a Spirit” Mind you, what do you mean exactly if i believe in Luck or Favor?

          • November 19, 2021 at 11:01 am

            And I sent messengers unto them, saying, I am doing a great work, so that I cannot come down: why should the work cease, whilst I leave it, and come down to you? Nehemiah 6:3

          • November 19, 2021 at 11:02 am

            What does this your comment buttressed?

          • November 19, 2021 at 11:08 am

            I don’t understand how it buttressed the nitty-gritty.

  • June 24, 2021 at 12:23 am

    Marvelous! It resonates with me. Thanks!

  • June 24, 2021 at 12:29 am

    The amount of insight I’ve gathered from this

    • June 27, 2021 at 9:00 am

      We must free ourselves from the shackles to find the hidden treasures of the Earth.

      • June 27, 2021 at 9:04 am

        I concur, it’s a beautiful thing when I can connect with like minded individuals
        Give me a follow bro🙌🏽

  • June 24, 2021 at 3:34 am

    Great write up.

  • June 24, 2021 at 4:01 am


  • June 24, 2021 at 4:30 am

    Nice piece. Needs a rewrite thought

  • Incognito Ink
    June 24, 2021 at 4:38 am

    A very interesting story. Keep up the great work

  • June 24, 2021 at 8:34 am

    Highly descriptive. Here’s a favorite image: “Mack’s dark brown shoes seemed to drown in the wood of the staircase below.”

  • June 24, 2021 at 10:21 pm

    Thank you, Sebastian, for liking
    The python-copy-index-count blog.

  • June 25, 2021 at 2:40 am

    Hey I am new to blogs. Hoping to learn new things from you all.

    • June 27, 2021 at 9:16 am

      The blogging community is a wonderful place to be.

      • June 27, 2021 at 9:54 am

        Sebastian how do you find my blogs?? Expect your honest reply. Lot of things to learn

        • June 27, 2021 at 11:05 am

          WordPress App search.

          • June 27, 2021 at 11:25 am

            Wow your site is so fascinating and creative. I like it.. I donot know when can I write beautiful and interesting blogs??

  • Meliha
    June 25, 2021 at 2:47 am

    This sounds like a cool story you should expand on. I don’t know if your writing buddy would want to, but I think you should.

  • June 25, 2021 at 4:51 am

    Where do you get your illustrations? They looks awesome 🙂

  • June 25, 2021 at 8:35 am

    Your writings are awesome Sebastian! I love reading your stories, great imaginations, beautifully written. Thank you for your wonderful work. Have you published your stories as books also?

    • June 27, 2021 at 9:25 am

      I’ll think about doing it after I finish translating the stories that are only in Spanish.

  • June 25, 2021 at 8:39 am

    Wow, mesmerizing.

  • June 25, 2021 at 9:55 am

    Thanks Sebastian

  • June 25, 2021 at 9:57 am

    I like the way you write your imaginative stories.The pics make it more exciting for the reader to read your stories

  • June 25, 2021 at 11:18 am

    I like this

  • June 25, 2021 at 3:46 pm

    I really like you’re writing.

  • June 25, 2021 at 10:48 pm

    Interesting story.

  • June 26, 2021 at 2:13 am

    You have clever descriptions. My writing is often disjointed. Have you written any books? July is coming. You may want to look into this? https://nanowrimo.org/what-is-camp-nanowrimo

  • June 26, 2021 at 5:09 am


  • June 26, 2021 at 12:49 pm

    This story has an interesting relation to knowledge. Mack says, “all these books are nothing. He told me that the eternal consciousness of the planet is at our reach. We just needed to heal ourselves.” But also later, “we wrote all these books to heal the world.”

    I think that the consciousness is deeper than the planet, and that is where it becomes difficult. The planet is itself part of an ecosystem, which includes both its external and internal ecosystem. The planetary system includes what to the human mind would be “violent” events. Yet they all seem to culminate towards order, whether it be those harmonious processes we see in nature or the nearly inconceivable cultural accomplishments which have taken place around the world, not to mention advances in scientific knowledge and technology. The thing is that the logic of the universe, on a micro-level, may include all of these books, this constant search and enjoyment of knowledge, experiment, and creating new states and interactions.

    What is really at stake is people learning what is good or bad. We live in a time of relativism, where people are unsure what is good for them or not, and this is a clouding of universal consciousness. That consciousness is human, because that is all we can know, being confined to our special-knowledge and physical senses. But the human is also an emanation of this natural universal process, and it is part of an interdependent ecosystem. I think that we are in a process of awaking to knowledge about this, but partly our social and partly our cultural relations impede our discussing new advances in science and unique perspectives on life and living.

    Thank you for the intriguing story!

    • June 27, 2021 at 10:00 am

      The predominant male perspective that ruled the Earth for thirteen thousand years has recently changed with the repositioning of the world’s energy center that used to be in Tibet.

  • June 26, 2021 at 3:00 pm

    Thank you for liking my videos

    • June 27, 2021 at 10:01 am

      It’s my pleasure to support other members of the blogging community.

      • June 27, 2021 at 12:56 pm

        I love people like u 😘

      • June 27, 2021 at 12:56 pm

        You want to know something…

      • June 27, 2021 at 12:58 pm

        People are bullying my mom and me because we have a exemption for masks we can’t breath when wearing one and everone is so rude it hurts me to see people doing that to my mom 😢

        • June 27, 2021 at 1:18 pm

          It’s difficult for people to see that others behave differently than expected. Have compassion on them.

          • June 27, 2021 at 1:23 pm

            Yes 👍 I will thanks 😊

  • June 26, 2021 at 3:00 pm

    U are really kind

  • June 26, 2021 at 10:41 pm

    Thank you, Sebastian!
    To like on python tuple.
    I hope I could contribute more.

  • June 27, 2021 at 1:44 am

    sebastian if that is your art work, my Lord in Heaven above you can think really well and your probably a thinker of reality and probabilities. Keep up the awesome work and never change buddy, you got it as you are doing an awesome job!

  • June 27, 2021 at 1:45 am

    your work is purely professional! your an awesome thinker, your work shows it.

  • June 27, 2021 at 1:50 am

    Sebastian your work is completely interesting. Dreams of the future painting makes ya think a little about life hereon Earth and if there is a future. the storms and types of storms that had been taking place with its duration is startiling to say the least. keep up the good work!

  • June 27, 2021 at 3:01 am

    Captivating. (I’ve started using the Spanish as part of my revision exercises.)

  • June 27, 2021 at 7:58 am

    Good afternoon, interesting!! I enjoyed reading it so much 👏🏼. I would like to thank you for liking my blog post “The Brawny Pearl 🧗🏻‍♀️💪🏼”. It meant so much to me. Have a lovely day 🌸

  • June 27, 2021 at 11:24 am

    Wow… Your stories are always engaging and awesome. Thank you Sebastian Iturralde & Burnheaven for sharing this amazing story.

  • June 27, 2021 at 9:49 pm

    Thanks a lot Sebastian to like my post.
    Your view and like matters a lot to me since I m a beginner.

  • June 27, 2021 at 10:20 pm

    It is a true one my friend

  • June 28, 2021 at 2:32 am

    Wow! This is great, we are the solution to our own problems. We need to heal ourselves.

  • June 28, 2021 at 4:27 am

    a good inspirational lines for a person good thoughts expressed in it

  • June 28, 2021 at 4:27 am

    if you are interested in novels visit my blog for some epic ones and follow the blog and read the novels and share the blog

  • June 28, 2021 at 6:26 am

    Your story was very nice.

  • June 28, 2021 at 1:13 pm

    Very very nice. Gives me hope. I know there is so much more!

  • June 28, 2021 at 3:44 pm

    Thank you for liking my post. I am RE-BRANDING and starting all over again. I am JUST finding you. I can’t wait to read your stories. You seem interesting and this story has me! Bravo.

    • July 13, 2021 at 7:53 am

      Good luck in your new adventure. Don’t forget to read my stories when you need inspiration.

  • June 28, 2021 at 5:43 pm

    I’m loving your incredible creative energy emanating from nature. What a treat. Look forward to reading more.

  • June 29, 2021 at 12:25 am

    Nice 👌

  • June 29, 2021 at 6:31 am


  • June 29, 2021 at 8:43 am

    Wow…it was like a beautiful dream.

  • June 29, 2021 at 5:56 pm

    Hi there! First, thank you so much, for your amazing support and liking my content it truly blesses me. If you have any constructive criticism or feedback, I am open to hearing them.

    Then, what a wonderful writer you are! Keep exploring the rhythm of the ideas flowing as you then put your pen to paper!

    Finally, Thanks for sharing your magic! You’re amazing really!

  • June 29, 2021 at 7:27 pm

    Very beautiful I am one of your biggest followers

  • June 29, 2021 at 9:03 pm

    hi, i just wanted to say thank you for reading my stuff. i’ve noticed you pop up and i appreciate your time & energy (and it’s also a genius idea that you write in both languages). hope you have a great rest of your day/ night!

  • June 29, 2021 at 11:27 pm

    Interesting and descriptive story sir

  • June 30, 2021 at 12:12 am

    This is yoga. Present is ALL that matters. The rest is all vain, past or the future.

  • June 30, 2021 at 1:34 am

    I hope dreams come true

  • June 30, 2021 at 9:37 am

    Thank you so much Sebastian

  • June 30, 2021 at 9:44 am

    There is so much mystery about that guy but it doesn’t matter since his only purpose was to heal the world. Now that I think of it, books really heal. This is great.

  • June 30, 2021 at 10:32 am

    True talk

  • July 1, 2021 at 4:20 am

    I couldn’t agree more. Thank you very much.

  • July 1, 2021 at 5:52 am


  • July 1, 2021 at 9:58 am

    Wow what a great story. I love how there was a connection to our earth. Great collaboration effort. Thank you both. ❤️

  • July 3, 2021 at 1:27 am

    Very intriguing. My mind was questioning as I read.

  • July 3, 2021 at 2:04 am

    I can only imagine the magic heldwithin a

  • July 3, 2021 at 6:36 pm

    Your “ease with words [is] incredible”

  • July 4, 2021 at 11:47 am

    Your site is really impressive. Do you create the artwork as well? The painting associated with this short story is beautiful!

  • July 5, 2021 at 12:20 am

    Sure that it true , persistence , perseverance and patience in everything we do is a key to unlocking our full potential

  • JaydaBrunson
    July 5, 2021 at 10:52 pm

    Nicely written!

  • July 6, 2021 at 10:52 pm


  • July 9, 2021 at 11:24 pm

    So true ✨

  • July 10, 2021 at 5:34 am

    Dear Sebastian, A very interesting story.

  • July 10, 2021 at 6:12 am

    I liked the continuous suspense in this story.

  • July 12, 2021 at 12:16 am

    It’s scary sometimes, when you totally relate to a fiction. I often wonder how the world would be if some of the most intense fictions would take place in 3D, isn’t it? By the way, don’t know why, but the names are really catchy. As I keep reading the characters seem to sink in my mind and that makes them so relatable. Strange but true! Love your story! 😉

  • July 12, 2021 at 1:55 pm

    Thanks again for posting these stories, they are an inspiration.

  • Jillann Brusstar
    July 16, 2021 at 9:54 pm

    Loved dreams of a future

  • July 17, 2021 at 7:46 am

    Again thank you for reading my blogs . Hope mack will be OK.

  • July 19, 2021 at 8:36 am

    Very interesting story dear, keep it up

  • July 19, 2021 at 3:30 pm

    This was a compelling read, one that held me to the last line. Thank you!

  • July 20, 2021 at 5:12 pm

    Intriguing. Seems like it is just the beginning of a longer tale.

  • July 21, 2021 at 9:26 am

    Nice creation

  • Roberta Dennis
    July 25, 2021 at 1:16 pm

    Thanks for your support! GOD BLESS.

  • July 25, 2021 at 3:41 pm

    Great story, Sebastian! Thanks for sharing.

  • July 31, 2021 at 9:12 pm

    Are you ready to create microlearning courses with the blog content?

  • August 3, 2021 at 12:14 pm

    Oh wow..Amazing read!

  • August 4, 2021 at 10:47 pm

    I like the way and skill you express your ideas in your own way.

  • August 6, 2021 at 9:33 pm

    An excellent tale. I think the current guide must have lost his way.

  • August 7, 2021 at 5:59 am

    As always thank you for reading my blogs.This 3 part story of the supernatural was my reason for bringing back my retired detective . Your story is working that way to I see. Wish I had half the readership that you enjoy. One day maybe tell me how its done?

  • Jeevarakshana.G
    August 7, 2021 at 9:48 am

    Really awesome
    Good to read…

  • August 8, 2021 at 7:11 pm

    Well done, thank you!

  • August 9, 2021 at 6:27 am

    Ooooo…this is my kind of reading, this is my favorite subject matter to read about and watch movies, documentaries, etc, about. Keep shining.

  • August 9, 2021 at 11:34 pm

    Dear Sebastian, Thank you for your amazing web site! Your art work is fabulous!

  • August 14, 2021 at 11:13 pm

    You are a good writer and a good story-teller. I enjoyed it.

  • Afrah
    August 15, 2021 at 8:05 am

    It was written so beautifully that while reading, I literally started imagining it right infront of my eyes 👀🤝

  • Miss Tara
    August 17, 2021 at 4:02 am

    It’s amazing how collaboration can spark creativity. I really enjoyed this!

  • August 17, 2021 at 8:15 am

    Interesting piece! I was captivated from start to finish.

  • August 18, 2021 at 8:06 am

    A nice piece!

  • August 18, 2021 at 10:57 pm

    Although, I haven’t understood your story well. But your work, vision and simplicity are appreciated from a writer’s perspective.

  • September 29, 2021 at 1:24 am

    You found yourself a loyal fan. Loved this one!!

  • October 20, 2021 at 2:32 am

    Yes you are right sir, our dreams full fil when our path in right direction, confidence and dedication.
    गीता में श्री कृष्ण भगवान ने अर्जुन को उपदेश में बोला है ” हमारा चयन ही हमारा प्रारब्ध होता है ।

  • Noahh_The8
    December 1, 2021 at 1:33 pm

    Sebastian One Thing, Do you Know RPC Or something?

  • January 19, 2022 at 11:40 pm

    Beautiful story, Sebastian. ‘To become immortal, and then die.’ That’s the great ambition of a writer.

  • Leave a Reply

    Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

    Author's Note
    The Andes' highlands served as a source of inspiration for this short story. I hope you'll find the same beauty and wonder in its words that I did while crafting it.
    Story Roulette
    Story Roulette
    Related Stories
    Switch Language
    My Wishlist
    Inspiration Tools
    Become a Patron
    Support my work on Patreon
    Join me on Patreon and get exclusive access to audio short stories narrated by yours truly. Your support will not only help me keep creating content but will also give you the opportunity to enjoy these stories.