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Rust and Sweat
June 30, 2021|Short Story

Rust and Sweat

Rust and Sweat

The players from the Metal Hearts and Rusty Necks entered the stadium. The shouts of the crowd shook the venue as one by one the athletes came out from opposite sides of the rectangular field. Their team colors were easy to distinguish, although their outfits were different from what one would expect from a friendly match.

Players from both teams wore high leather boots and military clothing. Despite that, the grass on the playing field was a wrinkle-free green blanket.

In the middle of the field, the referee was the only one wearing shorts. Upon arrival, the participants seemed ready for a gladiatorial battle. The referee looked to his side, noticing that the players were ready.

The members from both teams wore full head helmets. Their armor looked ready for a battle, this didn’t seem like a sport for everyone.

On one side of the field, the Metal Hearts touched their helmets between them. While the referee held a metal ball the size of his hand―a shiny steel sphere. Letting everyone know that the game was about to begin.

The crowd became silent for an instant. Ready to watch their favorite teams give it all on the field. The expression of companionship couldn’t reach a higher level. Quietly waiting for the referee to drop the ball.

Waiting… lengthening everyone’s silence. The referee held the metal sphere over his palm, arm outstretched. He only had to turn his wrist to start a match that could take hours.

Players from both teams couldn’t stop staring at the sphere, that was their most important goal. But they couldn’t be distracted from the rest of the challenges that awaited them. With solid nerves, they were eager to start the match. Each and every one of players went through years of training before risking entering the field. Now they were just steps away from playing the most important game of their lives.

The referee, finally, dropped the steel ball. No one knew what was going to happen. The hearts of everyone present quickened, their gazes focused on the ground where the metal sphere would land.

A metal hand came out of the ground to catch the sphere and the Rusty Necks started running. Grumpy_Feet, their captain, was in front of her team when a series of metal plates rose up in front of them.

Hammer and Silver_Blade leaned against a metal plate to allow Grumpy_Feet to climb onto their backs. The battlefield was almost complete, a maze stood between them and the metal sphere.

Grumpy_Feet jumped down to offer strategy to the Rusty Necks. She signaled with her hands and everyone followed her. A giant screen on the edge of the stadium showed two countdowns. At that time, the rules of the game weren’t clear to anyone.

As they ran, the ground parted a few steps from Grumpy_Feet, exposing a dark tunnel. She stopped and raised her right arm to signal to the others. Before long, two robotic tigers emerged. Grumpy_Feet gave the signal with her arm raised and Marauder ran past her. On the other side of her, Hammer passed carrying a metal object.

Hammer and Marauder slammed their weapons onto the head of one of the robots. While the other creature jumped. Grumpy_Feet was about to take the full blow from the machine… Silver_Blade pushed her out of the way and was hit by the metal tiger.

Before they could react, Hammer and Marauder took out the second robots.

“Are you okay?” Grumpy_Feet asked once the robot was lifted off Silver_Blade.

“I’ll be fine,” he replied, getting up slowly.

There’s no time to waste, Grumpy_Feet thought as she looked up to see that her team’s timer had two more minutes than her opponents’. “We need to find more of those things.”

The Rusty Necks ran after her, while in the stadium bleachers the crowd went wild for the spectacle. Both teams overcame obstacles trying to increase their timers. Going through a constantly changing maze and finding surprises.

Another group of metal tigers appeared on the other side, the crowd watched the Metal Hearts defend themselves on the giant screen, but something was wrong. The color of the robots’ eyes was different than before―they were now bright red. Their attacks were almost impossible to evade.

In horror, the crowd saw one of the metal creatures grab the arm of one of the Metal Hearts’ members and dismember him… the referee saw the scene from one of his computers on the outer edge of the playing field and immediately stopped the game… but the system was not responding.

“What’s going on?” the referee asked as he turned to see his teammates. But they had also lost control of the stage.

The members of Metal Hearts were unable to defend themselves from the attack of the metal tigers. Soon they were all seriously injured on the ground, and the robots lost interest and turned around in search of the Rusty Necks.

“We have to stop this,” said the referee, when a red face with a serrated smile appeared in the middle of his screen. “We have been hacked.”

Having no idea what was happening—Grumpy_Feet continued to lead the Rusty Necks through the maze. “Come on guys. We have to hurry…”

Two metal tigers appeared on top of the wall to the left of the Rusty Necks. This was unusual as the robots were supposed to come out of the underground tunnels.

Grumpy_Feet immediately noticed that something was wrong. “Defense stance.”

The five members of the Rusty Necks banded together to defend themselves. Hammer and Marauder stood in front of the others. Their weapons would serve as shields in case of emergencies… no one imagined that another pair of robots would appear on the wall behind them.


Silver_Blade managed to cut one of the creatures with the lasser edge of his sword, while Blade kept hers raised.

“What’s going on?” Blade asked.

“We have to get out of here,” Grumpy_Feet said. “Something is not right.”

The three robots waited, staring at the Rusty Necks. For an instant they seemed to have been deactivated and then jumped at the same time.

Hammer supported the weight of one of them crashing into his shield. He with all his might held the robot, waiting for an opportunity to knock it down. When he saw the blue light from Blade’s sword pass by.

“Let’s move on,” said Grumpy_Feet.

The four robots lay motionless on the ground while sparkles came out of them

I have to get us out of here, Grumpy_Feet thought as she ran in front of her team. The monitor with the timers now only showed a happy face with a ragged smile.

The stadium floor began to vibrate.

“Help me up,” Grumpy_Feet said and climbed onto Marauder’s shoulders. She saw a twenty-foot robot walking and destroying the walls of the maze.

Grumpy_Feet caught a glimpse of the Metal Hearts. “Come up, we have to help them,” he said from the top of the wall.

One by one, members of the Rusty Necks clambered up the wall of the laverint. Then they started running after Grumpy_Feet.

The Metal Hearts seemed to be cornered by the giant robot.

As soon as the Rusty Necks arrived, Silver_Blade jumped and landed with his sword on the giant robot’s back. He then turned and extended his arm. Blade ran up to him and jumped, grabbed Silver_Blade’s hand and was pulled upwards. Falling on the robot, she used her laser-edged sword to cut off its head.

The Metal Hearts saw the robot fall in front of them.

“We better work together,” Grumpy_Feet said, as soon as she was close enough to the Metal Hearts.

They nodded.


Sebastian Iturralde

I am a fiction blogger and lover of literature, art, and all things creative. As a citizen of this beautiful planet, I am constantly inspired by the natural world around me.


  • June 30, 2021 at 8:25 am

    I loved it. You just can’t trust robots … Or technology. It’s almost a cliff hanger. I hope there’s more to come.

    • July 13, 2021 at 8:17 am

      Someone has to hunt down the person responsible for all this chaos.

      • familyrebirth
        July 13, 2021 at 12:21 pm


  • June 30, 2021 at 8:29 am

    Beautifully scripted.

  • June 30, 2021 at 8:32 am

    I find it more creative. Magnificent!

  • June 30, 2021 at 8:36 am

    What a heart touchinnng and incredible ,wooooow !

  • Bob
    June 30, 2021 at 8:38 am


  • June 30, 2021 at 8:41 am

    My favorite so far. Very entertaining.

  • June 30, 2021 at 8:59 am


  • June 30, 2021 at 9:33 am

    Very beautiful

  • June 30, 2021 at 10:25 am

    Love the description and the way you transport the reader to the stadium.

  • June 30, 2021 at 10:46 am


  • June 30, 2021 at 1:20 pm

    A good beginning for a longer piece. It reminds me of Blade Runner and The Lottery (for some reason). Show and tell almost balanced.

  • June 30, 2021 at 2:37 pm

    Outstanding writing! Fiction is how I got my start writing so it holds a special place to me. And thanks for liking my stuff, as well.

  • June 30, 2021 at 9:39 pm

    Very beautiful, continue your creativity, and I hope we exchange enlightened thoughts

  • July 1, 2021 at 4:30 am


  • July 1, 2021 at 5:19 am

    What can I say, there is obviously no limit to creative minds ability. Turning a computer game into a reality show is really something to admire for originality.

  • familyrebirth
    July 1, 2021 at 5:36 am

    Yeah. This is cool. Great thought

  • July 1, 2021 at 7:42 am

    Nice writing. Almost like a futuristic Gladiator game. Very entertaining and I love the way you spun the story. Great action piece. Thanks for sharing. 🤗 Joni

  • July 1, 2021 at 11:16 am

    Hey Sebastian, the introduction of the character “she” startled me. You lost me at that point. Of course, I’m older than your audience and perhaps your style of writing is over my head and comprehension. But, you do have a story to tell. I still think you should present your talents to the entertainment industry. Adapt your scenes to 15 minuet intervals and the overall rendition to one or two hours. Become the writer, producer and editor. Keep feeding your strong imaginations with entertaining features. By the way, thanks for your ‘likes’ on my bogs. I pray that the messages therein inspire you along your journey.

  • July 1, 2021 at 1:51 pm

    Very magnificent and beautiful creativity

  • Elaine Harris
    July 1, 2021 at 2:15 pm

    I love the picture – so atmospheric.

  • July 1, 2021 at 5:34 pm

    Very cool!

  • July 1, 2021 at 6:00 pm

    I enjoyed that and found it quite gripping Sebastian, it also left me wanting more and do you intend to contuine the story or is meant to end like that. It was like a futrusitic version of the movie Rollerball and that stadium in the picture is very fitting to it all.

  • July 1, 2021 at 9:35 pm

    Thanks again for all the likes. My short story Bulmyeol Jakgo-hada has it’s own page now. 😁


  • July 1, 2021 at 11:19 pm

    Love the tension in this. But how did Grumpy_Feet turn from a she at the beginning into a he at the end?🤔

  • July 3, 2021 at 1:18 am

    I liked that Grumpy_Feet was female.

  • July 3, 2021 at 6:22 am

    Please don’t forget to share my page and follow

  • July 4, 2021 at 3:24 am

    Nice Job

  • Renu Suri
    July 4, 2021 at 5:19 am

    Wonderful story..very engaging

  • July 4, 2021 at 6:39 pm

    I loved this! My heart was racing !

  • July 6, 2021 at 2:41 am

    wonderful scripted

  • July 6, 2021 at 8:10 am


  • Susan
    July 6, 2021 at 1:23 pm

    I was reminded of Christians being the prey for lions during Rome’s heyday.

  • July 8, 2021 at 10:04 pm

    Your blogs can iniate a TV or anime series

    • familyrebirth
      July 9, 2021 at 6:25 am

      You are right!

  • July 10, 2021 at 7:12 am

    In one word masterpiece

  • July 10, 2021 at 9:17 am

    I love this.When everything changes, there is one thing left to do. I think that the one thing left is to be the agent of change or to join the change. Because change is dynamic. 😀😁

  • July 10, 2021 at 2:18 pm

    Beautiful😊.please follow my site and check the content. Thank you

  • July 12, 2021 at 12:39 pm

    Is there a second part? Definitely wasn’t expecting the plot twist!!

  • July 13, 2021 at 9:15 am

    Love the imagery!!

  • July 24, 2021 at 10:24 am

    just wow. I have another blogger inspiration but won’t write the way you do because you’re a pro. But, I will keep reading for sure.

  • familyrebirth
    July 24, 2021 at 7:17 pm


  • July 26, 2021 at 1:20 pm

    Hello name mate. Thanks for the interest in my blog. Is there a way to read your stories without signing up for audiobooks?
    Niki Sebastian 1eclecticwriter

  • July 28, 2021 at 12:53 am

    The pictures look very interesting and bring you into the story.

  • August 10, 2021 at 6:06 pm

    This is beautifully written! I can see how this is going to trigger deeper thoughts about technology and the roll of humans in its development and future. Looking forwards to more!

  • August 12, 2021 at 4:21 pm

    What a nice a ideas

  • paulmessinger
    November 15, 2021 at 12:51 pm

    I, actually, got more engaged when the character was identified as a ‘she’, expanded the concept and narrative…which was only the beginning of the expansion…

  • November 19, 2021 at 9:30 am

    Very interesting and well written. The Metal Hearts and the Rusty Necks started the game believing that they were each other’s enemies. Before the end of game, however, they discovered that their shared interests were more important than their differences, and that they needed to work together. I think this is an important lesson, particularly for some people in my country, the United States.

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    The Andes' highlands served as a source of inspiration for this short story. I hope you'll find the same beauty and wonder in its words that I did while crafting it.
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