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The Hunter
June 2, 2021|Short Story

The Hunter

The Hunter

Once again, Simon opened his eyes in that room that was becoming a little more familiar. This time he felt leather straps tied against his wrists and ankles. Repeatedly, he pulled his bonds with all his might—finally managing to break the strap that held his arms.

Simon immediately began to undo the rest of his restraints. Soon enough, he got up from the stretcher and analyzed his surroundings. Everything was just like the last time he woke up in the strange room. The same feeling of being trapped in a doctor’s office, and the memory of the men in white coats conducting their experiments returned to him.

Looking at the room’s only exit, Simon knew something was different—but he couldn’t understand his intuition. His suspicion grew and he smashed the door with his elbow.

Simon stopped after breaking the door open… the metallic stank of blood surrounded him. Nothing was like the last time he tried to escape. The hallway walls were covered with bloodstains. Simon had to cover his nose, the odor was unbearable.

What happened here? he wondered, stepping out of the room. Something was seriously wrong but he couldn’t stay to find out. Immediately, he turned to the right and saw a metal door blocking the way. To the other side was his only way out—the same path he took when he encountered the beast in the corner. The memory of that day passed through his mind and he remembered the pain on his neck. Simon reached with his hand but the dart was gone.

I have to be careful, Simon thought. This could be another trap, I can’t trust them.

His cautious footsteps led him through the blood stained corridor. The doors to the other rooms were destroyed, his intrigue grew with every step—in one of the rooms he caught a glimpse of what appeared to be a human arm and he moved faster.

I have to get out of here, he thought, still covering his nose with one hand. When he reached the end of the hall he found two options to continue. To the right another metal door and the darkness of a broken lamp hanging from the ceiling; to the left an opportunity to continue looking for a way out.

Simon paused. Hiding his body, waiting for a sign. In that moment, he saw glowing eyes in the darkness. He forced himself to continue looking, and noticed a creature moving in front of the metal door that blocked the corridor to the right.

The creature slowly came out of the shadows. Its torso moved as if it was an arachnid with slender legs hitting the ground with each step. Simon hid, unable to control his breath—fear too over him. However, he couldn’t wait and get caught. While the creature slowly approached.

Simon remembered the strength he had the last time. All that he was able to do… but this time seemed different and he decided to run. Surprising the creature with his speed—making it take a step backwards, before it started chasing after him.

He felt the cold air against his face as he ran, and the noise that echoed against the walls with every step the creature took. Simon feared the sharp claws of the creature chasing after him. His mind couldn’t stop thinking about the ease it would require to cut through his skin… and he kept running.

The creature ran at full speed, almost catching its fleeing prey. While its watering mouth spilled saliva. Its eyes focused, trying to predict the man’s next move—but his prey was too fast.

Simon almost lost his hearing behind the loud beating of his heart. Moving faster than he could have imagined possible to evade the creature, he saw pieces of wall flying off after avoiding the spider’s attacks. He couldn’t know if he was on the right path, he ran with hope of not finding…at the end of the hall he noticed a metal door blocking his way. Simon couldn’t slow down and slammed into the metal door.

The creature failed to predict its prey’s movements and saw the man push himself off the metal door. The giant spider uselessly moved its legs to reach him and only managed to grace the skin of the man.

Simon turned as he fell and stood up quickly to continue fleeing… when he noticed that the creature had wounded the skin of his arm. I’m done, he thought, staring at the wound.

The creature slowly turned on the metal door, peered at the human and paused.

Why keep running away? Simon asked himself. He held his arm with the opposite hand to get a closer look at his wound…it was worse than he had imagined. His blood began to fall to the floor. His fears grew stronger… Simon could no longer think about what he should do to save his life. All was lost. Even if I manage to escape, I’ll bleed to death.

Simon saw the creature slowly approaching… and he felt a burning sensation inside his wound. The pain was almost unbearable, but somehow he managed to stay on his feet—watching in surprise as the wound closed on its own. Impossible, he thought. I can heal myself…

The creature continued approaching… The expression on Simon’s face changed, the fear disappeared and he became the hunter.


Sebastian Iturralde

I am a fiction blogger and lover of literature, art, and all things creative. As a citizen of this beautiful planet, I am constantly inspired by the natural world around me.


  • Betty Kilonzo
    June 2, 2021 at 10:14 am

    I had to check all the other stories… Loved it!

    • June 2, 2021 at 12:56 pm

      Betty, it’s good to have you here. You must give yourself the entire tour of my fiction blog.

      • June 8, 2021 at 8:04 am

        Wow Sebastian I am glad to come across your blog. The stories are interesting.

        • June 12, 2021 at 9:43 am

          I’m happy that you have finally arrived and I hope you enjoy the full walkthrough of my fiction blog.

      • July 1, 2021 at 3:31 pm

        Hi William Whitten here checking out your site…pretty amazing dude!!!
        Great visuals too.

  • June 2, 2021 at 10:15 am

    I love it… I had to switch on the notification bell just to keep following

  • June 2, 2021 at 10:25 am

    Love the way you write.. So exciting

  • June 2, 2021 at 10:31 am

    Thanks Sebastian for your wonderful stories.

    • June 2, 2021 at 1:01 pm

      Hani, it’s a pleasure to take you for a moment to a magical universe.

      • June 4, 2021 at 2:39 pm

        Sebastian, I’ve had this idea for a long time.. Would you like that we discuss it?

  • June 2, 2021 at 10:50 am

    I was trying to be lazy before I go get my kid from his friend’s and got dragged into reading the whole story. Enjoyed it and it was great at getting me hooked into reading the whole story before I realised it.

    • June 2, 2021 at 1:08 pm

      Tyler, it’s nice to know that I managed to spark your imagination.

      • June 2, 2021 at 1:09 pm

        Good writing is good writing and you can spin a tale that drags you in.

  • June 2, 2021 at 10:51 am

    Thank you for a wonderful content to read . I’ll finish shortly just wanted to be the first to post 📯 miss it 😂

    • June 2, 2021 at 1:10 pm

      It’s a pleasure… next week you’ll have a new opportunity.

      • June 2, 2021 at 2:05 pm


  • June 2, 2021 at 10:57 am

    You have a Dean Koontz kind of a mind. 🙂 Keep it up!

  • June 2, 2021 at 11:02 am

    It’s ok

  • June 2, 2021 at 11:42 am

    I loved that

  • June 2, 2021 at 1:18 pm

    Very satisfying. It made me wonder at the satisfaction I felt that he became the hunter…

    • June 3, 2021 at 5:19 pm

      I’m happy that you liked it. We all have the ability to become hunters.

  • June 2, 2021 at 1:49 pm

    Another fantastic story!

    • June 4, 2021 at 12:38 pm

      Peter, thanks. I’m doing my best.

      • June 4, 2021 at 1:57 pm

        You never know what I may be seeing from you next.

  • June 2, 2021 at 2:00 pm

    Hey Sebastian, I noticed that you liked a post on my blog recently (Hovel of Babel). How in the world did you find it, I use it as an archive for stuff that I later might post elsewhere 🙂

    • June 4, 2021 at 12:40 pm

      I guess the WordPress app doesn’t have privacy in mind, but I’m happy it happened. I hope to see you again soon for more stories.

      • June 29, 2021 at 11:39 pm

        Wow, I am happy you always like my blogs, you are such a writer,i have always enjoyed your blogs. Thanks for encouraging young writers.

  • June 2, 2021 at 2:03 pm

    Intriguing..The prey becoming the hunter, I can sense the thrill!

  • June 2, 2021 at 2:55 pm

    Sorry, I can’t use that app.

  • June 2, 2021 at 4:41 pm

    I’m awed by how you urge me to create a short film in my mind as I read your phenomenal writing. Thank you kindly for sharing your gift.

    • June 5, 2021 at 7:24 am

      Dani, it’s a pleasure to help your mind to run wild in a magical universe.

  • June 2, 2021 at 5:09 pm

    The pray becoming the hunter reminds me of Ezekiel 21:25-27. Simon conquering the beast is like man overcoming the devil. In the end, those who have been the prey of the beast will be exalted and those of the beast will be abased.

    • June 3, 2021 at 7:26 am

      I like your analogy. I like Revelation 19:11- chapter 20:15

      • June 3, 2021 at 7:30 am

        Even better – TOPS! The Exalted of the Exalted!

    • June 5, 2021 at 7:27 am

      Phillip, it’s just a matter of knowing yourself.

    • June 6, 2021 at 12:39 am

      That’s facinating. But actually that’s Basically triggered by that work.

    • June 6, 2021 at 12:42 am

      That’s facinating and great talent. But actually that’s basically triggered by that masterpiece.

  • June 2, 2021 at 5:11 pm

    What a turn of events, here, have a like for this brilliantly crafted story!

  • June 2, 2021 at 7:19 pm

    Now that is a cool twist and possibly the creature itself being it’s own undoing. Nice!

  • June 2, 2021 at 8:29 pm


  • Chandana Jagadish
    June 2, 2021 at 9:18 pm

    It just blew up my mind! Amazing 😊

    • June 5, 2021 at 7:34 am

      Chandana, my fictional blog is full of stories to give you the same effect.

  • June 2, 2021 at 11:20 pm

    Wow! Amazing story👍👍

  • June 3, 2021 at 12:34 am

    Hi Sebastian! I’ve noticed you liked my first post, with that I very thank you, man! I saw your and see what you. You know, I was inspired by it! That’s actually exactly the best what I saw here! Following and looking forward for new!👍

  • June 3, 2021 at 12:43 am

    Another great instalment. If I may suggest, have you looked at PenPee.com? From what I have read from doing my research for my creative writing, it looks to be a legitimate platform for writers to get noticed and get paid for the material they submit and gets read by subscribers to the site. As always looking forward to your next chapter.

    • June 5, 2021 at 7:47 am

      I really appreciate your suggestions and will definitely take a look at them. I hope to see you again soon and don’t forget to do the full tour of my fiction blog.

  • June 3, 2021 at 5:33 am

    Another really enjoyable story. You have such an amazing imagination, Sebastian. I look forward to your next creation.

    • June 5, 2021 at 7:50 am

      Skittz, I’m happy to have you here and will work hard for my next creation.

  • June 3, 2021 at 8:01 am

    I don’t know if it is a coincidence or not but my brother’s name is Simon and you look so similar to him 🙂 also I am loving your stories 👍🏼

    • June 5, 2021 at 8:03 am

      Panchi, that’s an honor. Everything is as it should be. Please enjoy them all.

  • A. M. Yeager
    June 3, 2021 at 8:13 am

    Daaang! That twist! This is brilliant.

  • June 3, 2021 at 9:14 am

    Amazing !

  • June 3, 2021 at 10:10 am

    I just dicovered your blog!! Cant believe I didnt know about you until now…

    • June 5, 2021 at 8:08 am

      Prajna, I’m happy that you finally arrived. Please stay for a while and enjoy.

  • June 3, 2021 at 10:11 am

    Hooking story! Cant believe I didnt know about your blog until now

  • June 3, 2021 at 10:15 am

    I would have died of fright because I have arachnophobia lol

    • June 5, 2021 at 8:14 am

      Shehreen, I hope it wasn’t too intense. I promise, my preview stories don’t have spiders…I think.

  • June 3, 2021 at 10:59 am

    Yes! This is great!

    • June 5, 2021 at 8:15 am

      Jus, I’m happy that you liked it. I hope you also enjoy the rest of my fiction blog.

  • June 3, 2021 at 11:43 am

    Good story

  • June 3, 2021 at 12:21 pm


  • June 3, 2021 at 2:20 pm

    If you want to be happy check out my blog, which has a ton of beautiful quotes.

  • June 3, 2021 at 5:16 pm

    Good writing,good read. Do you also do your own illustration? Thank you for your stories,btw.

    • June 5, 2021 at 8:30 am

      JL, it’s nice to have you here. The illustrations are found on the Internet and I then modified them to match the style of my blog. I hope you enjoy the rest of my stories.

  • June 3, 2021 at 8:52 pm

    Lovecraftian horrorshow fun! Really good writing!

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:18 am

      Paltry, I appreciate the reference and hope you are enjoying my fiction blog.

      • June 5, 2021 at 10:29 am

        Very much so! Great engaging writing!

  • June 4, 2021 at 12:54 am

    I think you meant “stench” or “stink” rather than “stank.”
    Intriguing story.

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:25 am

      Elene, how nice to hear from you. Thanks for your help and I hope you enjoy my other stories too.

  • Trishna
    June 4, 2021 at 12:54 am

    This was gripping, thrilling, unnerving and amazing!

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:26 am

      Trishna, if you liked this story, wait until you take the full tour of my blog.

  • June 4, 2021 at 1:42 am

    Hello Sebastian.
    This is a superb art display.
    Man you’re a great influencer,able to provock humanity’s mind / thinking with your style of writing.
    Keep it up dear

  • June 4, 2021 at 1:44 am

    Hey Sebastian, I am new to the blog thing looking for guidance. Thanks .
    And by the way loved your blogs .

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:30 am

      Rash, all I can tell you is to look for inspiration in others until you find your own way.

      • June 5, 2021 at 9:33 am

        Thank u ,
        I would look up to you to

      • June 7, 2021 at 12:37 am

        Thanks for your valued advice I would keep that in mind

      • June 7, 2021 at 12:38 am

        And I would like to ask you what do you think I can improve in my blog to make it better

  • June 4, 2021 at 7:01 am

    Loved your story.

  • June 4, 2021 at 9:50 am

    What a twist of events!

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:33 am

      Daniel, nice to see you here. I hope you continue enjoying my fiction blog.

  • June 4, 2021 at 9:52 am

    Excellent blog!
    Also, thanks for liking my review of Goodfellas, it means a lot to me.

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:33 am

      ThatOneKid, in this way we help each other.

      • June 6, 2021 at 1:09 am

        Thanks sir.
        I’m trying really hard to get followers and this means a lot to me.

  • Rebecca Hayes
    June 4, 2021 at 10:03 am

    Outstanding!! And this comes from a woman who’s had a life-long terror of spiders. I didn’t see the end coming — nice surprise!

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:35 am

      Rebecca, I hope you enjoyed it despite your terrors. I will try to make other kinds of stories for you.

  • June 4, 2021 at 12:43 pm

    Hello Sebastian! That’s me again. I am very sorry for disturbing you. I am so thankful that you were first to like me, and I clearly involve in plot of your stories so I would like to ask about opportunity to get contact with you to get information about WordPress platform’s opportunities. Thank you!

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:41 am

      Maayan, it’s good to hear from you again. I hope my knowledge may be of service, please use my contact form to reach me.

      • June 7, 2021 at 12:50 am

        I’ve sent you a message. Looking forward to talk to you and next story!

  • June 4, 2021 at 1:35 pm

    Wow! Your fiction blog and beautiful and well-done! I’m so grateful you liked one of my posts which gave me a path to find yours! Cheers, and thank you.

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:42 am

      Hermione, I’m happy that you’re finally here. Please let your imagination run wild and enjoy the ride.

  • June 4, 2021 at 2:53 pm

    Nice work, I’d love to post something like this soon.

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:47 am

      Practice and discipline can get you anywhere. In the meantime, inspiration is something this blog could offer. See you back soon!

  • June 4, 2021 at 8:15 pm

    Our wounds will heal and we will become the hunters.

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:49 am

      Trust your instincts and come back for more stories.

      • June 7, 2021 at 6:17 pm

        Thank you, I will come back for more. If you like my writing, please also leave a comment on my page.

  • June 5, 2021 at 12:53 am

    Nice one… The Hunter

  • June 5, 2021 at 10:09 am

    Sébastian Whatsapp me please on +254706325147

  • June 5, 2021 at 1:20 pm

    I enjoyed reading this story! My favorite lines: “While its watering mouth spilled saliva” and “The creature continued approaching… The expression on Simon’s face changed, the fear disappeared and he became the hunter”. I would love to see how he hunts this hungry creature. So good!

    • June 7, 2021 at 10:49 am

      Sam, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Don’t worry, I’m sure we’ll see more of Simon and his adventures.

  • June 5, 2021 at 4:33 pm

    Turning on the notification! I had fun playing the characters in my head. Thank you for this piece!

  • June 5, 2021 at 4:54 pm

    Hey, you read one of my completely random blogs that I really wasn’t expecting anyone to ever find, but I thought I’d repay the favour and discovered your blog.

    And I’m glad I did because I absolutely loved the story!!! And that was even without the context of the prequel which I can’t wait to read.
    I’ll definitely check out the rest once I make it through my exams.

  • June 5, 2021 at 5:06 pm

    Thank you so much. I needed to hear this.

  • June 5, 2021 at 5:07 pm

    Your work speaks to me. Always!

  • June 5, 2021 at 5:39 pm

    Seb, it’s a great priveledge being in your site. Your fiction stories are more than fictions. Well done bro.

  • June 5, 2021 at 6:05 pm

    Wonderful story you got here. I wonder if this is only a part of a longer story?

    • June 7, 2021 at 11:00 am

      I’m glad you liked it and we’ll see more of Simon in the future.

  • June 5, 2021 at 6:27 pm

    Good text

  • June 6, 2021 at 12:36 am

    It’s a great deal. Looks like am going to be around longer. Tx

    • June 7, 2021 at 11:04 am

      Byamugisha, I’m happy to finally have you here. Enjoy your time on my fiction blog.

      • June 8, 2021 at 8:37 am

        Absolutely am hoping for the best.
        And also dont forget to check mine out.

  • June 6, 2021 at 4:32 am

    I checked all stories it’s midblowing bro

    • June 7, 2021 at 11:11 am

      Vilas, that’s amazing. I’ll have to start translating the rest of my stories for you.

      • June 16, 2021 at 1:16 pm

        Yes bro from when

      • June 16, 2021 at 2:08 pm

        Bro it’s very pleasure for you translating for it helps

  • June 6, 2021 at 6:45 am

    I will need to spend some time reading much more of your work. Looking forward to it.
    This was very exciting and, as others have said, is quickly and effectively engrossing. Great writing.

  • June 6, 2021 at 2:00 pm

    Wow!!! I feel like at the movies. Your fiction is so vivid, I feel alive in it as I read.

  • June 6, 2021 at 5:01 pm


  • June 7, 2021 at 1:17 am

    Nice one dear

  • June 7, 2021 at 3:57 am

    Hello nice articles, can you guide me you are very good writer give me some tips for my website can you help me

  • June 7, 2021 at 5:29 am

    Nice one
    How did u make ur website and did u use a teamplate. if u did can you send me that

    • June 7, 2021 at 11:37 am

      Abhav, I’m very glad to have you here. Hope you’re enjoying my work and sorry but I can’t help you out with that.

  • June 7, 2021 at 5:30 am

    ¿Cómo hiciste tu sitio web y usaste una plantilla? Si lo hiciste, ¿puedes enviarme eso?

  • June 7, 2021 at 5:43 am

    A professional writer 👏

    • June 7, 2021 at 11:40 am

      Rock, I’m happy to have you here and I hope you enjoy my work. Feel free to send your students to practice with my stories.

      • June 7, 2021 at 12:16 pm

        Yes, of course. Thanks 😊 🙏

  • June 7, 2021 at 11:16 am

    great work and thanks for the follow… I am now following you and look forward to hearing more. 🌷

    • June 7, 2021 at 11:48 am

      Cindy, I’m glad to have you here. I’ll come up with more stories for you.

  • June 7, 2021 at 11:22 am

    Nice chapter and cliff hanger for a graphic novel. There was an interesting graphic novelist on Talk of Iowa today 6/7 name Benjamin Percy who gave out some interesting knowledge about publication of genre work. He also works for Marvel and is coming out with his own series of SF novelas and a superhero. Talk of Iowa comes on WSUI/IPR if you care to listen. But I found him very interesting.

  • June 7, 2021 at 12:09 pm

    Is that the end of the story?

    • June 12, 2021 at 9:00 am

      hashtaglassie, I really hope things turn out well with your current situation. I’ll make it up to you and come up with the next part of the story.

      • June 12, 2021 at 7:19 pm

        I would love that. I enjoyed your story very much. And thank your for your concern. Mostly my rambling is just me being whiny or saying things I can’t to a world that doesn’t know me. Luckily, or perhaps divinely, the worst scenario of the situation you refer to has blown over.

  • June 7, 2021 at 1:13 pm

    As always it’s amazing 🐱✨❤️

    • June 12, 2021 at 9:03 am

      Butterfly, hoping I’m the type of mushroom you have to eat on a weekly basis.

      • June 12, 2021 at 9:35 am

        😂😂 sure

  • June 7, 2021 at 3:00 pm

    Nice work!

  • primeadministrator
    June 7, 2021 at 4:16 pm

    But… … …Sebastian? Its just a list, bullet points about what is important to me. I’m not really a writer. More of a collator or a curator. I used to be a psychotherapist; 45 years of it, until my stroke. That’s the story I should be telling. Meeting the Angel of Death during brain surgery. Wow!

    I feel too old, too tired. Bilbo Baggins at the end of Lord of the Rings. Drift away, lille Hobbit, its time for a new adventure.

    Jonah Steinhaus

    • June 12, 2021 at 9:07 am

      Jonah, I just hope my stories help you relive past experiences and create new ones.

  • June 7, 2021 at 7:30 pm

    Hi. I’m loving your stories Sebastian. They are really good, and pretty hook able to read. Keep up with the great work.

    • June 12, 2021 at 9:24 am

      Carol, I’m happy you’re enjoying my fiction blog. I’ll keep reading yours to get a better perspective for future stories.

  • June 8, 2021 at 2:33 am


    • June 12, 2021 at 9:36 am

      Riya, I just hope my stories inspire yours and vice versa.

      • June 12, 2021 at 9:37 am

        Yup. They do

  • June 8, 2021 at 7:51 am

    Hi Sebastian, I’m Cocoa. I keep discovering your pieces and I really enjoy them. Great work 🙏🏽❤️

  • June 8, 2021 at 9:13 am

    I love this, why have I never been here before, I wonder. Will check out the ones before this… And the ones to come

    • June 12, 2021 at 9:49 am

      You arrived just in time for the show to begin. Please enjoy the ride.

  • June 8, 2021 at 11:09 am

    Amazing work!

    thank you for liking my post sebastian 🙂

  • June 8, 2021 at 11:28 am

    Love the ending when he becomes the hunter. Good writing, keeps one in suspense and the picture of what I believe of a spider fits perfect with the story. I liken it to the devil, who once was an angel, but fell because of pride. I will be back for more.

    • June 12, 2021 at 9:56 am

      I’m glad you found this little blog on the net and I hope you find wisdom in it.

  • June 8, 2021 at 1:34 pm

    I really enjoyed this. Very well done!

  • June 9, 2021 at 5:07 pm

    Another great post. I can actually picture the scene and that’s the sign of a good writer! Kudos!

  • June 9, 2021 at 8:14 pm

    I loved it, felt every bit of it. You rocked !!!

    • June 12, 2021 at 11:00 am

      You have to do the full tour of my fiction blog. It’s highly recommended.

      • June 12, 2021 at 11:02 am

        Thank you Sebastian, I surely will.

  • June 9, 2021 at 9:32 pm

    Pls follow my bloghttps://moraldays.wordpress.com/moral-days/#

  • June 10, 2021 at 2:14 am

    You are a world-class Sebastian.😀🤝🏅🏆

  • June 10, 2021 at 12:24 pm

    This one is great. I look forward to the next chapter.

  • June 10, 2021 at 7:36 pm

    Wow, good one

  • June 14, 2021 at 5:02 am

    I have some query I want to talk to you please.

  • June 15, 2021 at 2:26 pm

    You tell a nice story.

  • June 18, 2021 at 4:54 pm

    Good I enjoyed it and a good ending with the turn of events. Nice job.

  • June 19, 2021 at 7:09 am

    Wow! You’re writing is so captivating! I love the imagery!

  • June 19, 2021 at 4:13 pm

    It is a good read, I am happy that I came across your blog. Keep writing keep inspiring.

  • June 20, 2021 at 7:41 am

    Great Imagination! I loved the story.

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  • June 22, 2021 at 7:39 am

    i love this!!! <3

  • June 25, 2021 at 7:33 am

    I don’t read much but I manage to finish the Hunter. I will try to read the rest later. Thanks for the story and like.

    • June 27, 2021 at 9:23 am

      It’s important to share the ideas we all have about the truths of the world.

  • June 25, 2021 at 11:37 am

    Amazing narration. Loved it.! I was expecting a little different climax at the end. Simon after helpless moves fell dizzy and when opened his eyes found himself in the same situation like in the beginging of the story. And the story goes in the loops..

  • June 29, 2021 at 12:53 pm

    Usted escribe súper bien. Gracias. Thank you for reading my posts. I have also written a few articles in Spanish. Do try to read and comment😊

    • July 13, 2021 at 8:04 am

      I’ll look for them when I have some time off from this overwhelming writing career. 😌🙏

  • July 10, 2021 at 7:08 pm

    Great premises, Sebastian. Interesting stuff

  • August 1, 2021 at 10:17 am

    Exciting narrative!
    You kept me glued to your story till the end.

  • August 4, 2021 at 3:45 am

    Great work you are doing brother, they all are so fantastic stories.🙏

  • August 29, 2021 at 12:15 pm

    This is a nice continuation from the last short story.

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