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Fumes of Glory
May 26, 2021|Kingdom of Glory

Fumes of Glory

Fumes of Glory

In the far lands of the Kingdom of Glory the knights of light departed on a blessed journey in search of honor and even redemption.

However, the distribution of the king’s army created the perfect opportunity for a crystal ambush, while the mightiest knights discovered what happens when light fails without the support of their companions: the blade, the hammer and the witch. The resulting events that led the townsfolk to learn that the golden had fallen had taken our heroes to a turning point.

Meanwhile, the rest of the group, including Reginald—the prince who’d lost his light—had no idea what Aslan was talking about. It was normal for the knight of light to lose himself in thought, and for some reason his ideas turned into adventures. That was the main reason Cleirk—a warrior from the northlands—had for following a knight of light. It was strange to see members of opposing guilds working together.

On the other hand, it was obvious that Sharai did not enjoy the company of an assassin—even worse when Kelsy and Cleirk worked as a team.

Everyone in the tavern was used to the treatment of town heroes—no one was surprised when they started working for King Frederick. However, the whispers of what had happened spread throughout the kingdom. It was the perfect opportunity for a disgruntled warrior in search of retaliation.

Aslan continued drinking, trying to leave his memories behind. It was shameful to think that after all his training he was so easily beaten. He couldn’t understand the source of the dark knight’s powers.

The rest of the group had a grim look on their faces, although with a lot of effort they tried to act as if this was a normal night in the tavern. Another day that ends well and provides a reason to celebrate. Until Darwin arrived—one of the warriors of the Blue Cross order.

“I didn’t know we serve traitors,” Darwin said for everyone present to hear. “What if it isn’t Aslan and his henchmen!”

Cleirk looked up and knew he couldn’t intervene. Darwin clearly intended to challenge Aslan, and a warrior must respect the traditions.

“Do you think you could have done better?” Aslan asked, turning to face the warrior.

“Anyone could do a better job than you,” Darwin said as he placed his ax on the bar.

Everyone present watched carefully.

“Let me see if I can understand,” Aslan said. “You’re upset about what happened, but instead of looking for a solution the warrior who did nothing is pointing fingers.”

“Maybe I just want to wipe the smile off your face.”

“Why don’t we take this outside?” Aslan asked.

Reginald looked at Darwin. Aslan must be crazy, he thought. It was obvious that Darwin looked bigger and stronger than Aslan.

“You’ll regret this,” Darwin said, grabbing his ax from the bar.

“I was hoping for some action,” Aslan said to his crew, as he tried to get up and noticed that he had drunk more than he expected.

Reginald held the knight of light to help him regain his balance.

“I’m fine… I’m fine,” Aslan said, holding onto the table.

“Are you sure of this?” Sharai asked.

“I’ll be fine,” Aslan said and pushed Reginald away with one hand. “Give me some room to get out.”

Staggered, everyone watched Aslan leave the tavern.

“We have to help him,” Reginald said.

But the rest of the group ignored the prince and walked after Aslan.

“Are you ready to meet your maker?” Darwin asked, holding his ax with both hands.

“I already know him,” Aslan said, struggling to unsheathe his greatsword, Spark, from his back. Grant me your power in this time of need, Aslan thought, staring at Spark’s silver blade.

Darwin attacked without a warning, carrying his ax with both hands—in a direct path of impact against the staggering knight of light.

Aslan leapt to the side, landing face down on the ground.

“Is this how you fight?” Darwin asked with a smirk on his face.

Aslan struggled to his feet—while everyone watched the fight from a tavern’s door or window.

“You haven’t seen anything,” Aslan said and struggled to raise his greatsword.

Darwin attacked again, this time the metal of his ax stroke Spark and a flash of light illuminated their faces.

“I’ll give you the opportunity to back down,” Aslan said.

Darwin smiled and charged. This time it was a series of continuous attacks—twists and turns that left everyone in awe.

None more so than Aslan who barely managed to dodge the attacks. “Is this all you have?” Aslan asked, turning his back to the warrior. “Where are you?”

Darwin frowned. “You were lucky.”

Reginald saw Aslan turn toward his opponent, just in time to protect himself with his greatsword from an attack. What is he doing? he asked himself.

Aslan deflected the attack and turned to face the young prince. Then he winked at him.

“Let’s see what you’re made of…” Aslan said, raising his greatsword in from him.

Darwin saw the knight attack—without the powers of light—and protected himself with ease. The two continued to clash their weapons, attacking and defending with accuracy.

Breathing heavily, Darwin looked up. “I see you fight with honor.”

Aslan wiped the sweat from his forehead with one hand. “It’s been a long time since I had a good fight.”

The two of them met again with their weapons, leaving a flash of light after the impact of the blades—Darwin found an opportunity and kicked Aslan’s feet from behind.

Aslan lost his balance and fell, hitting his head on the ground. Then, he felt the cold metal against his throat.

Darwin raised his ax and reached out with his hand to help the knight. “Get up,” said the warrior, “you’re buying the next round.”

Reginald couldn’t believe what was happening. Darwin hugged Aslan and the two returned to the tavern—they passed through the crowd. On reaching the bar they received two mugs of beer and toasted. What just happened? Reginald wondered.

Then, Reginald waited for everyone to enter the tavern and briefly gaze up at the stars. My dad trusts them too much, he thought, turning to watch Aslan drinking and singing next to Darwin. What kind of people are they?

Reginald held the coin sack in his hand, and decided to return to the tavern to see how the night would end.

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Sebastian Iturralde

I am a fiction blogger and lover of literature, art, and all things creative. As a citizen of this beautiful planet, I am constantly inspired by the natural world around me.

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  • May 26, 2021 at 4:40 pm

    Fantastic story!

    • May 29, 2021 at 1:02 pm

      Joseph, you’re too kind. This story is the sequel of a series that I’ve been creating since last year. Actually, the support given by the community for “Outside Light” reminded me how much I enjoy a series of short stories. Enjoy!

      • May 29, 2021 at 1:21 pm

        Thank you. Your stories are fun to read.

  • May 26, 2021 at 4:54 pm

    Great story! The story is entertaining.

    • May 29, 2021 at 1:06 pm

      Marcie, I’m happy to know you enjoyed it. I hope it didn’t feel out of place being the sequel of a series.

  • May 26, 2021 at 6:40 pm

    Sabastian, I liked this, very good idea for a story line, has adventure, also thanks for like on my page, God Bless, Dave

    • May 29, 2021 at 1:20 pm

      Dave, I’m so glad you enjoyed the story line. Thank you for helping the blind understand.

  • May 26, 2021 at 6:54 pm

    Cool!

  • May 26, 2021 at 9:58 pm

    Sabastian, have you thought about fashioning your creations for television? You are in the league of Star Wars.

    • May 29, 2021 at 1:39 pm

      Grandma, you are too kind. You should have seen the smile on my face. I really hope your wishes come true. Until then I’ll just keep on writing.

  • May 27, 2021 at 3:19 am

    Very entertaining story there Sebastian.Am elated the more for liking my page

    • May 29, 2021 at 1:46 pm

      Ted, I’m very happy that you got here. I hope to see you back soon for my next weekly story.

  • May 27, 2021 at 5:42 am

    Wow this blog is pretty awesome! I didn’t know what it was all about. Great job!

    • May 29, 2021 at 1:51 pm

      Chris, I’m so glad to finally have you here. I hope you enjoy everything I do to entertain my guests. Please, feel at home!

  • May 27, 2021 at 8:32 am

    You did a great job Ittu! I like and enjoyed your story you never failed us. Thank you for sharing such a good story like this. And I thank you also for liking my posts. Gracias!

  • May 27, 2021 at 8:49 am

    You never disappoint with your stories Sebastian, I was just as surprised as Reginald! Incredible work, as always

    • May 29, 2021 at 2:22 pm

      Miles, thank you. I was a bit sad to see Reginald out of his comfort zone.

  • May 27, 2021 at 10:33 am

    This was great! Thanks for liking my review on Resident Evil, would be great if you could share with others too, I’m looking to write more game reviews!

    • May 29, 2021 at 2:28 pm

      Gamewriter, good to have you here. I hope that more readers find the descriptions of your reviews as entertaining as I do, thank you. I hope to see you back for my weekly short stories.

  • May 27, 2021 at 12:27 pm

    This would make an excellent graphic novel of movie. You have a backstory and a current narrative. It this plot you do more showing than telling which gives it a visual effect. Very good, you’re on your way to stardom.

    • May 29, 2021 at 2:31 pm

      Mary, you’re too kind. Although, I like what you said. May your wishes come true.

  • May 27, 2021 at 1:53 pm

    Sebastian,this just funtastic dear,very inspiring.

    • May 29, 2021 at 4:18 pm

      Maurice, it’s good to know that you enjoyed it. I hope the inspiration moves you forward.

  • May 27, 2021 at 3:56 pm

    We have changed our site address from 9musicstudio to Christianitynews24.

  • May 27, 2021 at 6:05 pm

    Really nice twist!!!!

  • May 27, 2021 at 9:53 pm

    Thanks for your like of my post, “Tribulation Prophecies And Doctrine 8;” you are very kind.

    • May 29, 2021 at 4:29 pm

      Eternity, thanks for sharing your knowledge. I hope you continue enjoying this series.

      • May 29, 2021 at 8:06 pm

        Your words are very kind, and grately appreciated. I will continue with this series of Tribulation related articles for quite a while. The purpose is to provide information that they may not be receiving from their pastor.

  • Hazel
    May 27, 2021 at 10:57 pm

    From a writer to another I must say your writings are quite Intoxicating. You can really get the reader engulfed into your work!

    • May 29, 2021 at 4:31 pm

      Hazel, I’m happy to know that you enjoyed my story. I like to write from the heart.

  • May 28, 2021 at 1:43 am

    nice work Sebastian 🙂

  • May 28, 2021 at 2:33 pm

    check out my blog if u want

  • May 28, 2021 at 5:21 pm

    Thank you forchecking out my blog hope you like the jokes

    • May 29, 2021 at 4:43 pm

      Chloe, thanks for the jokes. It’s good to entertain oneself. Enjoy the rest of my fiction blog.

  • May 28, 2021 at 7:48 pm

    Thanks for liking my blog. But more than that, I’m so glad it gave me the chance to check out yours and your short stories. I love reading and I really enjoyed this one. Though short, I was totally transported to a whole different world, so effectively. Fantastic job!

    • May 29, 2021 at 4:48 pm

      Heidi & Carolyn, I’m very happy to know that it transports you to a different world. I hope you come back to my fiction blog for more stories.

  • suzyf2000
    May 28, 2021 at 9:31 pm

    Keep on writing. It is an admirable endeavor and to be bilingual too!

  • May 28, 2021 at 9:52 pm

    Your imagination is annointed!

    • May 29, 2021 at 4:52 pm

      Elaine, I am but a mere tip of a pencil.

      • May 30, 2021 at 9:01 am

        Your work “Cheeky Gentleman” made me realise how much the world has changed. There are very few gentlemen they are actually an endangered species 😅

        • June 2, 2021 at 11:13 am

          Women have the power to maintain human traits for later generations.

          • June 3, 2021 at 6:03 pm

            Absolutely! Yet God in His wisdom made it such that the seed would come from the man. Even so the man gets the privilege to plant in “multiple sites”. When a woman “catches” a seed it’s lockdown for almost 9 months 😏

          • June 5, 2021 at 8:36 am

            I’ll do my best. 😎

  • anonymous
    May 29, 2021 at 1:01 am

    I find your stories very unique and interesting. And I truly wonder how you found my blog in its early going, too. I’m glad you seem to have enjoyed reading it. I’d sort of presumed no one would discover that blog except by accident, much less find it very readable or enjoyable. I admire your commitment to your writing, I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. Keep up the great work!

    • May 29, 2021 at 4:54 pm

      Anonymous, thanks for noticing. Writing for me is the best way to live.

  • May 29, 2021 at 2:46 am

    Thanks for liking my post sebastian. 🙂

    • May 29, 2021 at 4:55 pm

      Thanks for commenting on this series and I hope you are enjoying the blog.

  • May 29, 2021 at 4:20 am

    Hey! am an addict to knights, valour and honor. The medieval times, as recreated by the creatives are a fascinating read. looking forward to more..

    • May 29, 2021 at 4:56 pm

      Njagik, then it was made for you. I hope you’ve enjoyed each of the stories in this series.

  • May 29, 2021 at 9:22 am

    It was a great story

    • May 29, 2021 at 5:01 pm

      Nishank, you are very kind. I hope you’re enjoying all the stories on my blog.

      • May 29, 2021 at 10:54 pm

        Yes, of course.

  • May 29, 2021 at 4:48 pm

    Aloha Sebastian! Thank you for liking my blog calendar. I just started re using wordpress and I don’t really know how too. That is why I am commenting here. Love this story and I am following you on linkedin as well. A L O H A !

    • May 29, 2021 at 5:05 pm

      Pake, it’s nice to know that you enjoy my stories. I hope you keep coming back for more.

  • May 29, 2021 at 9:55 pm

    Nice story 👌

    • June 2, 2021 at 10:34 am

      Ranjini, I’m glad to know that you enjoyed it. I hope you also like today’s story.

  • May 29, 2021 at 11:45 pm

    Nicely done, it makes me want to continue which is all anyone could ask. Cheers dude.

    • June 2, 2021 at 10:36 am

      Stephen, I’m glad to know that you enjoyed this series. Of course it will continue, but today I have a different story if you like.

  • May 30, 2021 at 12:59 am

    Hii.. Sebestian, beautiful story.. Thanks for following and encouraging me for the next step. U are so kind.

    • June 2, 2021 at 10:38 am

      Sanjivani, I’m happy that you enjoyed my story. That’s why we are here, to encourage each other. Don’t miss out today’s story.

      • June 8, 2021 at 12:23 pm

        Yup. Definitely! Keep the good work on.

  • May 30, 2021 at 2:56 am

    You always get it right Sabastian❤This is so great.

  • May 30, 2021 at 12:13 pm

    Hello Sebastian!
    I don’t know how old u r.
    I am a school student 13yrs old.
    I thank u as u liked my 1st post.
    My website is https://science388102162.wordpress.com

    • June 2, 2021 at 10:48 am

      It was a pleasure, keep going as life becomes as positive as you can see.

  • May 30, 2021 at 3:24 pm

    As I have only begun reading your stories, I look forward to going back to your previous story line. It’s like Camelot and Excalibur meets Narnia.
    Great story
    Thank you for your likes as well.
    God bless

    • June 2, 2021 at 11:17 am

      A war of energies is about to explode in your mind.

      • June 2, 2021 at 5:22 pm

        I read them, it’s a good story, I like the characters, and the imagery. I like Spark, it reminds me of Excalibur. Looking forward for more.

  • May 30, 2021 at 4:58 pm

    I think you should look into screenwriting, or graphic novel writing.

    • June 2, 2021 at 11:20 am

      That’s something I would enjoy, for now imagining universes and write them down it’s enough.

  • May 30, 2021 at 6:44 pm

    Can we talk more please are on whatsapp?

  • May 31, 2021 at 5:09 am

    Hello dear! I am from ‘Kings Fitness’. Thanks for visit and like our posts. I am very thankful that you are supporting us. I am a small user and will be very glad if you promote our posts.

    • June 2, 2021 at 11:27 am

      Rudraksh, thanks to you for taking the time to stop by my fiction blog. I hope to read more of you too.

  • May 31, 2021 at 5:56 am

    Mind blowing story. Keep sharing.😇

  • May 31, 2021 at 9:45 am

    First time reading one of your stories Sebastian, this was incredible!

    • June 2, 2021 at 11:45 am

      Darnel, I recommend you take a tour of my entire fiction blog. It’s an unforgettable experience.

  • May 31, 2021 at 10:51 am

    So glad you liked my dark 90,s article, it brought me to your wonderful storytelling blog..which I need to spend time reading..
    Thank you so much.. blessings in love & light GG🧡💚🤔

    • June 2, 2021 at 11:57 am

      GG, it’s good to finally have you here. I’m still finishing some things up but I suggest your take the entire tour my storytelling blog.

  • May 31, 2021 at 11:35 am

    Precise

  • May 31, 2021 at 12:37 pm

    Ahoy there, This is Bob from Bob’s black hole. Just wanted to say thank you for looking at my blog. Going to read your story now.

    • June 2, 2021 at 12:04 pm

      Bob, it’s nice to have you here. I hope you like what I’ve done with the place and please take the full tour of my fiction blog. Enjoy!

  • May 31, 2021 at 12:56 pm

    Lovely ❤️❤️

  • May 31, 2021 at 6:37 pm

    Thanks, again for popping by.

  • June 1, 2021 at 12:34 am

    Thanks sir like my posts

  • June 1, 2021 at 12:35 pm

    Me gusta mucho.

  • June 1, 2021 at 4:42 pm

    Hi Sebastian! LOVED the story. I also wanted to say thank you for liking my (stupid) first post (I don’t know if you clicked it by mistake, lol). Looking forward to reading up more!

    • June 2, 2021 at 12:46 pm

      Nishqax, I love the idea of your blog and I see that you’re starting to put everything in order. I hope you can take a full tour of my fiction blog, maybe you’ll find inspiration.

  • June 1, 2021 at 5:19 pm

    Well done, Sebastian! Great story.

    • June 2, 2021 at 12:46 pm

      Paul, I’m happy to have you here. I hope you like the rest of my fiction blog.

  • June 1, 2021 at 5:54 pm

    follow me if u like the stories?

  • June 2, 2021 at 1:20 pm

    Will do/have started..lol.. fascinating perception of character awareness.. blessings..GG💖

  • June 2, 2021 at 9:51 pm

    much thanks to you for taking a gander at my blog 🙂 have a great day ahead!

    • June 5, 2021 at 7:36 am

      It’s a pleasure, and keeping creating art, that’s what life is all about.

  • June 3, 2021 at 7:11 am

    I really am enjoying reading ur post 😄

    • June 5, 2021 at 7:58 am

      Butterfly, comments to a post are like fragrance to flowers.

      • June 5, 2021 at 8:10 am

        😄❣️ have great weekend ❣️

  • June 3, 2021 at 12:27 pm

    Thank you for liking my blog, just a novice, so appreciate it. Your story is very gripping and I enjoyed it but like you have written it is a sequel so couldn’t connect to it. Still, it was an interesting read! How long have you been blogging?

    • June 5, 2021 at 8:19 am

      Anita, it’s good to have you here. I hope you are enjoying my fiction blog. I’ve been working on it for six years.

  • June 3, 2021 at 8:56 pm

    Really great writing. You are very talented! The naming was excellent, gives the reader an immediate idea of what to expect of the characters.

    • June 5, 2021 at 9:20 am

      Paltry, I’m glad you continue enjoying my blog. I hope to see you back soon.

  • June 7, 2021 at 7:51 pm

    Thanks for writing this story. It helps me see things in a new light. Did you also draw the pictures?

    • June 12, 2021 at 9:27 am

      I’m happy that you liked it. I hope you follow this series as it’s destined to create a new way forward.

  • June 10, 2021 at 12:58 am

    Amazing Story, Thank you. I must share it with my community

  • June 11, 2021 at 6:16 am

    Please check out my blogs
    https://aqsanazirblogs.wordpress.com

    • June 12, 2021 at 12:46 pm

      I have… you can see me working towards a goal instead of waiting for it to manifest by chance. I’m glad that you are part of it.

      • June 12, 2021 at 8:43 pm

        Thank you

  • June 12, 2021 at 2:06 am

    Thank you for your excellent work, your command of English is admirable. Do you write in your own language too? Thanks for following the Automaton, let’s see where it takes us…

    • June 12, 2021 at 12:59 pm

      It’s a pleasure to have you here. Yes, I publish my stories in Spanish too. We’ll see…

  • June 14, 2021 at 7:44 am

    Another great story, congratulations on your work 👏🏻

  • June 15, 2021 at 8:01 pm

    Thanks for your like of my post, “Tribulation Prophecies And Doctrine 10 – Key Factors In Daniel’s Prophecy 2;” you are very gracious.

  • June 20, 2021 at 6:47 am

    Didn’t see that ending coming.
    Great piece!
    Bravo!

  • July 16, 2021 at 2:15 pm

    I would have spared him too if it led to a Guinness! But beer? It would have to be something truly special. 🙂

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